tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-189798594954206511.post3407962440686522481..comments2023-10-26T04:34:51.393-07:00Comments on "I'll Have What She's Having": The Official Blog of Elisa Lorello: a challengeElisahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08399296868934652020noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-189798594954206511.post-36048717977684204082009-07-18T06:49:07.829-07:002009-07-18T06:49:07.829-07:00As far as I know, the deadline hasn't expired ...As far as I know, the deadline hasn't expired yet, Mary Jo. Might be a different contest. <br /><br />I think the eavesdropper would be the reader. I haven't picked it up in a couple of days, but my dear writer friend gave me some advice about building the tension between the two characters.Elisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08399296868934652020noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-189798594954206511.post-61454597381318760952009-07-17T19:56:20.774-07:002009-07-17T19:56:20.774-07:00Hey this is for the Reading Writers contest, right...Hey this is for the Reading Writers contest, right? I flaked on entering that one, had ideas, though, didn't materialize until the day of the deadline. Oops! I did enter teh mirror contest they had a few months ago.<br /><br />I'm very intrigued by the eavesdropping conversation, though not sure how you would indicate the party that is listening, if it all needs to be in dialogue..<br /><br />Good luck girl!Mary Johttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06729559222307081988noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-189798594954206511.post-69181513296365170772009-07-16T20:08:27.887-07:002009-07-16T20:08:27.887-07:00Thanks, G-Liz! Hope all is well with you!!Thanks, G-Liz! Hope all is well with you!!Elisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08399296868934652020noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-189798594954206511.post-77149810005560930842009-07-16T18:22:35.292-07:002009-07-16T18:22:35.292-07:00Hey!!! Checking in to see how things are going!!!...Hey!!! Checking in to see how things are going!!!Gina Eaveshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16145297908173255612noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-189798594954206511.post-37833379015762033022009-07-16T07:56:05.149-07:002009-07-16T07:56:05.149-07:00Thanks, Mamie! I may be changing the URL since the...Thanks, Mamie! I may be changing the URL since the blog is no longer titled "Kairos Calling", but I'll be sure to send out a notice when I do.<br /><br />:)Elisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08399296868934652020noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-189798594954206511.post-2351380347861522902009-07-16T07:55:09.306-07:002009-07-16T07:55:09.306-07:00Thanks, Monica. If you're not already a fan of...Thanks, Monica. If you're not already a fan of Aaron Sorkin, rent everything he's ever written, and just *listen* -- his dialogue is positively musical.<br /><br />David E. Kelly and Nora Ephron are great too!<br /><br />Good luck, and thanks for the comment! Let us know how you do!Elisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08399296868934652020noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-189798594954206511.post-78725753778452437592009-07-16T06:18:28.054-07:002009-07-16T06:18:28.054-07:00Thanks for stopping by "Can I Do It?" - ...Thanks for stopping by "Can I Do It?" - I get updates on Kairos from Google Reader, so usually don't comment. I really do enjoy your entries.Mamiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04702758010419552137noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-189798594954206511.post-60637780111822924642009-07-16T06:02:38.438-07:002009-07-16T06:02:38.438-07:00i need work on my dialogue writing so i can see th...i need work on my dialogue writing so i can see the challenge this assignment might pose. I tend to write in big, philosophical, descriptive, stream of consciousness chunks. I definitely need to remedy that. Good luck and looking forward to reading more posts.monicahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10856873455553508540noreply@blogger.com